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Inner Dragon


   It was in the dead of night when I was walking home from my karate tournament and finally made it to black belt when I realized something: I thought this would be my greatest day ever I worked so hard to get this but it was the exact opposite.

   My name is Shing. I am a 17 year old boy. I was the shortest in my class I was the only 5 foot in the class. I was wearing my signature cap supporting my favorite NBA team the Bulls back when Michael Jordan was on the team. As well as my favorite jacket a classic blue jean one some might say but  I had put my own design on the back the Chinese symbol for fire. I don't know why but I always loved the flame. As I was walking on my way home nothing special ever before. Emphasis on the before. I was walking through an almost abandoned part of the town a slum if you will. I had a feeling I was being watched. But didn't pay much attention to it.

   "Man all that work for my goal and all the rip I took while trying to get it and I still not happy. I need some change. Where is my destiny!?" I said as I kicked the empty soup can so hard it crashed through a building window. As I did that I heard a guy's voice

   "My, My what a fire. You will do just fine." the voice said.

   "Huh? Who said that?!" I yelled in surprise.

   "A friend." the voice said.

   "A friend? I don't need you I got plenty of friends!" I told the voice

   "Well, Who said anything about you needing me?" the voice said. As something hit me in the back of my head and knocking me out.

To be continued…
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my first tf story enjoy. If you can make a good illustration of this story then feel free to message me i looking for a good illustration for each part i bring in
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nice, and also, a good way to end this page, it catches more people/sticks you to find out who it is, and why and... you know things you can only find out be continue reading
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~sonicexcel Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Yeah and the funny thing is This is the first story i ever wrote in my life.
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Mood: Big Grin ~UnknownLover101 May 4, 2012  Student Writer
Nice start to your story, and I can tell that you are a martial arts fan
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~sonicexcel May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yea i am and thx for the faves
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~UnknownLover101 May 6, 2012  Student Writer
ur welcome
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